In the last year, my daughter has grown considerably as a person and what an incredible person at that. She has now started writing poetry on her own. Jumps for joy! What I find funny, though, is that she has such an easy time rhyming her poetry and she struggles writing WITHOUT rhyming. When I write, I struggle to rhyme and rarely do it. In fact, I think out of the 300 poems I have written only two actually rhyme. Needless to say, we are opposite on that front.
She has just started a new blog that she will be adding some of her poetry to as well as other posts, so I highly recommend you check it out:
Just to show you that my talents do NOT lie in rhyming poetry, I thought I'd share with you one of my very morbid poems I wrote in 2008. Let's just say that I was not in a happy place.
Dead on a Sunday
swallowing our poison
on the count of three
a romeo and juliet
of echoing pleas
tastes of bittersweet
still guiding me
i am swimming in circles
and drowning at sea
we will die together
in a mystery
dead on a sunday
'twas meant to be
2/28/08
1. I love the randomness of the picture! That's why I love you!
ReplyDelete2. Talent runs in the family for sure, awesome poem!!
Thanks, Lisa!
Deletehully-gully, here comes mollie. i prefer "coffin love", sorry, no worry.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry, but I've never been into necrophilia. Why don't you post your lovely poem for all of us to read, Peter? :O
Deleteiambic pentameter to you. um, no, i think i'll keep that poem our little secret :D
DeleteI think that's a good idea. I'm the only one who understands you enough not to give the psych ward a call and get you a permanent visit.
Deletebe nice to me, i'm one of yours :D
DeleteI'm always nice to mine. :)
Deleteyes, the rhyme can distract from the melancholy quality. however a lot of younger poets - teens specifically will want to rhyme.
ReplyDeleteI think my struggle is getting away iambic pentameter, as Peter pointed out above. I can't do it, so I don't bother anymore. My daughter doesn't seem to have a problem with getting away from the lameness of that. At least that's good.
DeleteYou never need a reason for a cat picture!
ReplyDeleteTrue 'dat!
DeleteI love her blog already :)
ReplyDeleteYes, it is great. Unfortunately, typical of my daughter, she has not posted anything since she first went on it. BIG SHOCKER!
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